[privacy] Changed some wording to be more transparent and understandable

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 # Privacy policy
 
-This website, [syndamia.com](https://syndamia.com) and [tiny.syndamia.com](https://tiny.syndamia.com), offers no user data submission (user accounts, reply forms, etc.).
+[syndamia.com](https://syndamia.com) and [tiny.syndamia.com](https://tiny.syndamia.com) offer no user data submission (user accounts, reply forms, etc.).
+Also, there is [no form of data collection with Javascript](#no-collection-with-javascript).
 
-**No data is ever collected to be sold** *but* some data may be collected, primarily [http logs](#http-logs), but [no collection with Javascript](#no-collection-with-javascript).
-However, I have no control over the used [third-party services](#third-party-services)
+Some [third-party services](#third-party-services) as well as some [essential server-side programs](#http-logs) may collect data.
+Any data I'm responsible for **is NEVER collected to be sold!**
 
 ### HTTP logs
 
-General HTTP requests and data surrounding them are saved, which may include: IP address, timestamps, exact page request, user agent, etc.
-These depend on apache2 defaults.
+General HTTP requests to the server (and data surrounding them) are saved, which may include: IP address, timestamps, exact page request, user agent, etc.
+My current web server software (program, which handles website requests) of choice is [apache2](https://httpd.apache.org/), and the data format (mostly) corresponds to it's defaults.
 
-One such data line could look something like:
+One such data line would look something like:
 
 ```
 1.1.1.1 - - [11/Jul/2023:14:28:11 +0300] "GET / HTTP/1.1" 200 668 "-" "Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:109.0) Gecko/20100101 Firefox/113.0"
 ```
 
-These logs could be useful when issues pop up, including server being too slow or being attacked in some way.
+These logs could be useful for certain issues, like bad server performance or malicious webpage access.
 
 ### Third-party services
 
 My domain is bought with [namecheap](https://www.namecheap.com/) and it's associated DNS entries are managed with namecheap servers.
-This means that DNS entries, or more simply, domain configurations, first go through namecheap, and that may or may not mean they can collect data from you.
+This means that DNS entries, or in simpler terms - domain configurations, first go through namecheap, and that may or may not mean they can collect data from you.
 
-Analogously, my server is hosted on [hetzner](https://www.hetzner.com/) servers, which may or may not be doing some sort of data collection.
+Analogously, my website is hosted on [hetzner](https://www.hetzner.com/) servers, which may or may not be doing some sort of data collection, outside of my control.
 
 ### No collection with Javascript
 
-[This site uses Javascript](/regarding-js.html), so some feature settings data may be temporarily stored in your browser.
+[This site uses Javascript](/regarding-js.html), so some feature configuration information may be temporarily stored in your browser.
 For what exactly that data is, read [here](/regarding-js.html#data-in-browser-storage).
 However, for now there are no plans on integrating any sort of statistics or personal data collection.